“I am forever changed as a writer”

The power of learning the art of Story

Hey writer! We're Emily & Rachel, your fav book coaches at Golden May. As pros, we know how much of a teeth-grinding, eye-crossing, hair-pulling frustration plotting can be. 

You’re tired of getting staring at the blank page and overwhelmed by never ending plotting decisions. You tell yourself everything has to be “perfect” or you have to be “ready” in order to start drafting, but you have no idea if you’re doing any of it right. 

YOU’RE HERE: 

😣 “I just don’t think I’ll ever understand story structure.” 

😣 “I don’t want to start drafting until my outline works.” 

😣 “I’m overwhelmed with the process of planning a book."

😣 “I’m terrified of making the wrong plotting decisions.” 

BUT YOU COULD BE HERE: 

🔥 “I’m so FREAKIN' excited for my book’s potential.” 

🔥 “My outline is totally KICKASS, and I’m ready to conquer the blank page.”

🔥 “I know EXACTLY how to adapt when my story or outline needs it.”

🔥 “I am forever changed as a writer.”

Never wrestle with your story’s plot again. 

Today marks the first day of your journey from blank page to working outline, from confusion to CLARITY.

A great story—at its core— is a tale about a character who changes, and how their change affects the world around them. We designed our self-paced course, From Story Idea to Cohesive Outline, to teach you how to use the SHAPE of how people change to build a cohesive novel. 

You’ll have everything you need to make plotting decisions you feel confident in, so you can face the page with excitement and possibility, feeling your heart race as you have epiphany after ephipany, knowing you have all the tools to adapt if you need to. 

With From Story Idea to Cohesive Outline, you’ll never feel lost, overwhelmed, or confused while plotting again. 

  • “This was the most helpful writing course I have ever taken. They broke down the ideas from craft books I had already read and infused it with meaning and tangible tools. I have never felt more solid in starting a draft.”— OE Soderberg

Say no more, I'm in!

Go from fuzzy idea to complete, WORKING outline in 30 days.

Yep, that’s it. 30 days.

One month to REVOLUTIONIZE how you write forever. 

One month to make you a MASTER of Story. 

We’ve witnessed our flexible, non-prescriptive plotting method work for both of us—a plotter and pantser!—as well as dozens of our coaching clients and students over the years. It’ll work for you too, no matter your writing process or what stage you’re at. 

The course content is broken up into 4 modules with bite-sized video lessons that each build on one another so you can keep moving forward and see progress no matter how busy your life is. 

Take each lesson one at a time or sit down and do them all. Start and stop the videos. Put it down and pick it back up. Whatever tickles your fancy. 

We’ve made it as easy as possible to kickstart and fast track your writing future in the midst of your busy life.

  • “I was so close to giving up, as I believed I’d never truly understand what created a strong story, and how. A massive thank you to Emily and Rachel, who proved me wrong… I’m SO excited to start drafting (again) and it’s all thanks to [this course].”— Sophie J

  • “Emily and Rachel’s positive energy really shines in each video of this self-driven course. There’s a deep sense of one of one. Throughout the course, I felt like the three of us were on a constant call. It’s like getting together with two old friends while simultaneously learning (so, so much!).”— Mara Zilda

A uniquely eye-opening craft course.

You’ve been scratching your head, struggling to understand plot structures and how they work. You’ve tried outlining in many different ways, but you’re never quite confident, never quite sure you’ve done it right—and you have no idea how to tell. Well, you've come to the right place.

We're here to teach you how Story works, why it works, and how you can use its shape as a guide in this tried-and-true outlining process, leading you to a cohesive outline that will set you up for drafting success.

  • Plotting fueled by your story's message, so you never get lost in the details.

  • Story planning that starts with character, so you can intentionally build a plot around how you want them to change.

  • A deep focus on the shape of Western stories, why the shape works, and how you can use it as a guide to craft your novel, working with your ideas, rather than against them.

  • An outlining process developed by the professional book coaches at Golden May Editing —a plotter and a pantser!—who've successfully used it to coach writers of all kinds.

  • “I'd read Save the Cat! and Story Genius (and McKee's Story) and they all made reasonable sense to me... but I was floundering around trying to fit all the pieces together… but I didn't realize I was struggling because I was still missing some pieces. This course filled in those missing pieces, helping me tie everything together." — Michelle Bushman

The goodies inside the course:

  • The content of our 6-month book coaching program, wrapped up in easy-to-understand video and text lessons

  • Guidance for how to master our unique Plot vs. Character Outlining method that combines the character theories from Lisa Cron’s Story Genius and the plotting approach in Save the Cat! Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody

  • Lifetime access to 4 in-depth Modules that guide you deep into the foundations of how Story works

  • Over 5 hours of video content with Golden May’s professional book coaches

  • 21+ exercises designed to develop your characters and outline at the same time

  • A complete workbook to keep all your thoughts in one place

  • 4 bonus lessons to dive even deeper into character and plot

  • Intricate example beat sheets from popular published works

How you'll build an outline that works:

  • Plan the heart of your story.

    The heart of your story—why you're writing it and what you want to say—is the lens through which you'll learn to make all story decisions, allowing you to craft an extremely cohesive narrative. In this course, we'll dig deep to identify the core of your story and use it to craft a strong outline foundation.

    “My love for writing returned and continued to grow. I’m confident that I have a strong basis to draft my story, but not only that… I understand why I am writing what I am.” — Sophie J

  • Learn to intertwine plot & character.

    What comes first, the plot or the characters? In this course, we'll teach you how to weave plot events and character arcs together at the same time. You'll develop a deep understanding of how story functions at its core so you can create a cohesive and impactful narrative.

    “A GREAT story is one where character and plot are so entwined that you can’t tell which is which. This course shows you how to do that.” — Rebecca Kludy

  • Build a complete beat sheet outline.

    Plot with boundaries, not prescriptions! Our Plot vs Character Outline method pairs plotting and character development theories from Story Genius and Save the Cat! Writes a Novel, without forcing your story into a box. Create an outline that sets you up for drafting success!

    “I've never had such a smooth NaNo experience (50k just poured out!), or enjoyed writing so much as with this book I outlined during their course.” - Daphne James Huff

Reviews!

Hear from those who've completed the course.

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Words can’t describe how thankful and grateful I am for t...

Sophie Jackson

I was so close to giving up, as I believed I’d never truly understand what created a strong story, and how. A massive thank you to Emily and Rachel, who prov...

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I was so close to giving up, as I believed I’d never truly understand what created a strong story, and how. A massive thank you to Emily and Rachel, who proved me wrong through their incredible and detailed lessons. The descriptions they provided were invaluable and I’m amazed at how much I learned throughout the course. The further I got into it, my love for writing returned and continued to grow. I’m confident that I have a strong basis to draft my story, but not only that… I understand why I am writing what I am. Every single lesson provided so much insight, description, explanation, and it was presented in a bitesized, engaging, manageable way. Although I have a complete rewrite on my hands, which I am NOT complaining about, I am happier with the goals, obstacles and major plot points my Main Character will face. I’m SO excited to start drafting (again) and it’s all thanks to the amazing Emily and Rachel.

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To write something great, you have to start with somethin...

Rebecca Kludy

A story is made up of character and plot, a GREAT story is one where character and plot are so entwined that you can’t tell which is which. This course show...

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A story is made up of character and plot, a GREAT story is one where character and plot are so entwined that you can’t tell which is which. This course shows you how to do that by tying the character arc to the plot beats, giving you a solid structure to build your story on. It doesn't matter if you are a plotter, a pantser or somewhere in between -- this class is for you.

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Mara's Review of FSICO

Mara Zilda

Emily and Rachel’s positive energy really shines in each video of this self-driven course. There’s a deep sense of one of one. Throughout the course, I felt ...

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Emily and Rachel’s positive energy really shines in each video of this self-driven course. There’s a deep sense of one of one. Throughout the course, I felt like the three of us were on a constant call. It’s like getting together with two old friends while simultaneously learning (so, so much!). This course allows you to figure out your hidden WHY, not just your character’s why, but your why, why are you telling your story. By far my most favorite part was to learn to craft characters, because I knew what all of them were going to do, but studying the why, made the writing flow! The character table is just genius! This experience was filled to the brim with powerful breakthroughs, but I don’t have space to list them all. Just trust my word and, regardless of what stage your story is currently in, take this course.

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Exactly what I needed!

Michelle Bushman

I'd read Save the Cat! and Story Genius (and McKee's Story) and they all made reasonable sense to me... but I was floundering around trying to fit all the pi...

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I'd read Save the Cat! and Story Genius (and McKee's Story) and they all made reasonable sense to me... but I was floundering around trying to fit all the pieces together. I had well-developed internal character story arcs (that admittedly needed more work than I was willing to admit) and a rough idea of the external plot (aka glimpses of epic scenes without clear story structure to progress from A to B to C)--but I didn't realize I was struggling because I was still missing some pieces. Maybe I would have figured it out on my own eventually through more months (...years...) of trial and error, but I didn't have to! This course filled in those missing pieces, helping me tie everything together. Also, it was like having the warm and thoughtful support of story coaches, without the discomfort of having someone else tell me what's specifically wrong with my story at the early stages when I'm still uncertain and defensive about all the unknowns. Instead, I was handed all the tools I need to take my story to the next level, and right now that feels pretty amazing. To the parchment and quill and beyond!!

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A Course You Need!

Megan Todd

This course takes a deep dive into how stories work, how to create complex characters and plotting! Emily and Rachel are engaging as they give you examples a...

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This course takes a deep dive into how stories work, how to create complex characters and plotting! Emily and Rachel are engaging as they give you examples and lead you through this detailed course. I’m confident that I can begin to draft my story with the wealth of knowledge and resources provided! You won’t regret it!

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Absolutely worth the cost!

Megan Wald

It's always hard for me to invest in courses like these because they usually cost a lot of money. But this course is worth every penny! I've read Story Geniu...

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It's always hard for me to invest in courses like these because they usually cost a lot of money. But this course is worth every penny! I've read Story Genius and Save the Cat before but the principles didn't register or change my process nearly a much as this course has! I finally, truly, understand those principles and will use them to shape every story I write! Thanks Emily and Rachel!!

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Frequently Asked Questions

  • Is there a payment plan option?

    Yes! You can pay in 3 monthly installments of $600. Just follow this link to check out here.

  • Will I get direct feedback from a coach in this course?

    This course is self-driven! You will not receive live instruction or feedback from a coach or editor. After the course, however, you'll have the option to book a spot in our Book Coaching program. We'd review your work from the course together and craft a custom coaching program to get you drafting as soon as possible.

  • What do I get from this course?

    By the end of this course you'll have a deep understanding of why you're writing your story, what you want to say, and who you're going to say it through. We'll dig into the intricacies of your main character's psyche so you know exactly what they want, why, and what's in their way—internally and externally. By the end of the course you'll have a comprehensive 'Save the Cat' beat sheet filled out, with notes on what happens externally (plot-wise) and internally (character arc-wise) in each of the 15 beats. With this in hand, you'll be prepared to draft.

  • Do I have to purchase the recommended resources?

    No! All the content you need to work through the course is included in the course's materials.